The day after a final visit
with my Aunt Marilyn
I needed trees and a body of water.
In a nearby park, passed a contorted filbert,
a dawn redwood, a dragon’s claw willow
budding though it was only mid-December.
Saw a muskrat den on a pond,
a cardinal hop on a knot of tree roots
exposed in a creek bed.
On the way home at dusk
I drove up a hill
to hundreds of starlings
sweeping into the sky,
a synchronized rise,
velvet black against blue,
and I drank in the wave of beauty
along with the ache of soon losing her.
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Karen – I can always count on your to encapsulate nature in such beautiful ways. “A synchronized rise” is wonderful. The starlings rising seem to echo you letting her go.
“I needed trees and a body of water.” You open a door to the images to come!
To drink in the wave of beauty – ah!
Your poem reminds me of how the day I learned of a friend’s death, I saw dolphins on the shoreline.
The line ‘saw a cardinal hop on a knot of tree roots . . .
gives a rat ta tat tat of rhythm that offers excellent contrast to the sweep of starlings.
Lovely work.
This is just lovely–beautiful sounds & images and so poignant an ending!
Thanks, Sylvia!
Thanks, everyone, for your comments!
and I drank in the wave of beauty
along with the ache of soon losing her.
Karen, all your concrete images that come before earn the closing. Good to see your words.