On Relating to Men
Years ago in couple’s counseling,
the therapist said I didn’t relate well to men
and now when I see Suzi smiling up at men
at church, sidled close, her eyes saying take me
and when I’m introduced to the dance
instructor I can only see his capped teeth
and softness and when he tells me about
the singles group, I look away at the woman
pouring coffee, th kids playing tag,
the open door promising freedom.
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I love how everything in the poem starting with the third line is based on looks, on what the eyes communicate.
So many layers to this!
Thanks for ‘getting it”
I enjoy your humor, but/and I found these lines terrifying:
and now when I see Suzi smiling up at men
at church, sidled close, her eyes saying take me
Your comments about terrifying interest me. I don’t see it so much as terrifying as just an observation on how things are.
I love how all the lines lead up to the last one.
Yep Roberta