The Edge We Used to Know but Have Forgotten
We had to be with ourselves for awhile
Relearn our heart in the din of stillness
Trail the breath in and out
Unhinge the rusty jawbone
Some days we tried to dance away the lonely
But our feet did not recognize their purpose
Arms swinging like dead logs
Fingers like naughty children refusing to snap
Other days we relished putting our feet up
Savored cookies and wine at odd hours
As if our parents were away
And we the royals we always longed to be
Now something stirs outside our window
That demands attention That shouts That flames
Take off the slippers and go to the door
Answer it
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What a weird time we are living in, but one packed with opportunity. It definitely feels like we were granted some time to rest for the amount of work we now have to do to make the world better. Thank you for posting this.
Wow, Sylvia! “tried to dance away the lonely,” “Arms swinging like dead logs”–your poem is teaching me how to write, as well as to act.
I love how this turns! So many strong images for the now.
love “as though our parents were away”
Could see this unfolding on your balcony…loved the images! thx for sea turtle haiku and card loved it!
go to the door and answer it….. yes, we must. Thank you for sharing.
Wow!
This poem takes my breath away. Amazing! Great job dear Sylvia
You’ve captured this historic moment with a beautiful intimacy.
Nicely done. The final stanza twists perfectly to show the urgency needed.
Other days we relished putting our feet up
Savored cookies and wine at odd hours
As if our parents were away
and that strong ending
Now something stirs outside our window
That demands attention That shouts That flames
Take off the slippers and go to the door
Answer it
Just wow.
Breathtaking, powerful.
I appreciate all your comments so much. Thank you! Write on and peace in your day!
I love the contrast of being stuck inside, quiet, lonely – that COVID has demanded of us, but has also given us the freedom of wearing slippers all day, wine and cookies, withdrawing into ourselves; and then you give us the last stanza – shouts, flames and the command to answer the door! Great writing!!
The third stanza describes what I have been doing during our lockdown and the fourth what I should be doing NOW. Thanks for your great reminder.
Love the title and being ‘with ourselves for awhile’ has been good for me.
Your title lured me in and your words did not fail my reading…
Fantastic! We will get over this and come out New people.