I fall asleep on the sofa
I fall asleep on the sofa
Rain falls,
the only poetry
this night.
It was my intention to write
stanzas of three
lines,
but rain
wrote one better
than I could achieve..
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Neat reversal: instead of the poet making poetry out of rain, rain is making the poetry. William Carlos Williams-like.
This poem.is truth.
Rings true to me. Thanks!
Love how nature always weaves itself into your poetry!
Nature and the Mt.Poet seem inseparable and what a canvas he chooses.
I like the stark simplicity
W.C. W. has been a favorite of mine for as long as I have written, Gaby.
Thanks, Linda truth is poetry.
Nancy, I am happy to know that the words ring true for you.
I got my feelings on the line early by being in and around nature, K. Bruce Florence. Thanks…
Pat Owen, simplicity has its place in poetry. Thanks…
Yes! Simple and just right. 🙂