Love and Longing at the Dentist’s
He slides the photo across the counter, points
to the smiling, youthful woman with sable
hair and shining eyes. It’s a portrait
of his wife at age eighteen, he tells me.
Wasn’t she beautiful?
It just makes me so sad.
I’ve heard his political views, his proud
stories of Rockwell International and WWII.
But today, he is handing me his heart.
I would be nothing without Gladys.
His voice breaks; tears surprise us both.
I pat his hand. He nods, sheathes the photo
in its faded manila envelope and tucks
young Gladys back into his coat pocket.
His shrug is a shameless ache. He shuffles
to a seat in the waiting room and stares
at his hands. Is he imagining them smooth
and strong again? Remembering their fervent
persuasion; long, lustrous hair streaming
through his fingertips?
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Got your readers right in the middle, you did. Life stories seen through the eyes of a poet enrich us all.
I love this poem, the dialogue, the questions in the last stanza. It is hard for me to imagine widowhood.
Another’s Love and Longing can strike us anywhere…even the dentist’s office. Good poem.
Wow, had to try and explain to my husband why I was suddenly crying over my biscuits and gravy just now…the pathos here…beautiful.
You brought the reader into his pain… good work
“His shrug is a shameless ache. He shuffles” is art. I won’t soon forget this portrait.
Thank you all so much!
‘His shrug is a shameless ache.’ Yes, I can see and feel this. Well done.
“Today he is handing me his heart.” Wow! You are both a sympathetic listener (were you a bartender in another life?) and a marvelous poet. Love the questions at the end.
Moving and lovely. Great job!
I love old people. thanks for sharing why i do…
Beautiful, Kathleen.