Drawing Alongside
“Look not to me for healing! I am
a shieldmaiden and my hand is ungentle.“
– Eowyn of Rohan
So many looking for rescue; too many to ride in on white horses.
Born and bred with chivalry filling the pockets of my genes, I can
no longer pass out mission statements or definitions printed on these
whitewashed pamphlets.
When did we abandon the fire in the mead?
The furnace burning hot in our guts? We’ve watered down the message,
accepted and swallowed pale missives selling lack, hearts and hands
behind stoic backs. We’re all handkerchiefs and apologies, in waiting—
between texts, between mouths, between truths beneath niceties—
all banners without seeing flags.
No more.
No more will I walk the ramparts, chasing ghosts.
No more will I go seeking dragons as proof
of my strength.
The Lady I seek
is more than some high and vaunted goddess, more than some wilting flower
needing rescue. I’ve been to that kingdom. I’ve attempted those quests.
No more!
She is both earth and fire.
She is wind and water.
She holds her own
sword and shield.
She stands with the elements—
Feet planted in battle stance;
storm screaming in her hair;
eyes that sizzle both lover and foe, alike,
differing only by her word, which washes
the surface of her world in the waxing and waning
magick of her lunacy.
I will not need to protect this one from the wolves (though I would);
I will not lock the doors nor lower the gates (if I could)——-Only run
there, beside her—a blade, an urn, a seagoing vessel, grin of teeth
and claw—our legs churning fog before the sun can think to rise,
the trees and their leaves blurring past eyes,
the dogs nipping heels and hackles
too busy laughing
to question the worth or validity of their names.
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Eowyn was always my favorite. I adore this poem Joseph – easily my favorite of yours this summer. It is so forthright and passionate. What I really loved is the epigraph, and how your thread followed from it so beautifully – with a blunt roughness. It rang with truth. My favorite phrase was —our legs churning fog before the sun can think to rise, the trees and their leaves blurring past eyes. Insanely well done sir!
Awesome! High praise, sir!
The Libra in me drifts, until a moment breaks the surface tension of “holding” and runs over in release. Eowyn holds a special place in my heart, as well; it is easy to get lost in Arwen’s story (the entirety of her choices and actions), her lilting language and voice. The hopeless romantic nature of it all–but Eowyn is inner strength without the (supernatural) magick, all spit and spite and fire.
I never wanted to scream YES at a poem before but here we are. Very nicely done. The layout supports the feeling very well.
My favourite:
The Lady I seek
is more than some high and vaunted goddess, more than some wilting flower
needing rescue. I’ve been to that kingdom. I’ve attempted those quests.
No more!
She is both earth and fire.
She is wind and water.
She holds her own
sword and shield.
She stands with the elements—
Feet planted in battle stance;
storm screaming in her hair;
eyes that sizzle both lover and foe,
Then my reply resounds with an echoing YES! So glad you felt this. That stanza you quoted flew out of me with equal fire; I’m glad it burned for you as well.
“She is both earth and fire.”
– I’m not sure if this is the literal center of the poem but it feels like the beating (radiating) heart of it. So good.
There are so many great lines in this poem. Here are a few: “storm screaming in her hair,” “eyes that sizzle both lover and foe,” “grin of teeth and claw,” and “our legs churning fog before the sun can think to rise.”
Thank you, Linda <3
Some of the most tangible images in my head as I wrote, too!
The blend of the real and the fantastic…such great creations everyday
Thank you, Jim!
I think it’s been a strong year for many of our number. I always love to hear my favorite voices of PoMo and see how they’ve grown, or changed, year to year.
Oh, all the yes. Striking sentiments, images, use of language, and line breaks.
I like hold her own/sword and shield.
Also the ramparts and ghosts, the dragons …
Good, good, and good!
haha! Knew there would be specific images that would scream your name in this one! Thank you, for the poem you posted last before this one; it helped kick my little are out of a funk and, I have no doubt, nudged (hard) this piece out of me
Stunning. The way “chivalry fills the pockets of my genes” sets up the back and forth between fantasy/reality makes the whole thing go, along with the imagery and the “magick of her lunacy”!
Thank you, Bernie!
The editor in me wanted to rein back the modern diction in places–wanted to square it up fully within the old imagery. I’m glad they didn’t detract from the whole, being given only 1/3 focus.