On Hazelwood Avenue 2001
We called it Little Brooklyn, a bubbling
gumbo of culture. Michelle & Tariq tangled
daily & made up. Barbara in her flamingo
splashed lawn chair prayed while clutching
her pale pink bible. Youngsters paddled in the shabby
pool & coin machines clacked in the basement
laundry while handyman Joe, who guzzled
his daily paycheck, paced the parking
lot with Buster the long-haired
chihuahua. One day Joe put his ear
to my Honda four-cylinder & offered
a diagnosis. Usually, he’d try to sell me
a task, five bucks to haul a trunk
of groceries, $20 for a wash
& wax. I’d stretch out by the pool on a patio
lounger with poetry, something vintage,
Neruda or Rilke. I’d stop every 10 minutes
& look up as if I’d sighted a full crescent
rainbow. I’d take the scene inside
my core with its carousel of race,
nationality & language. I’d inhale deep
& slow & congratulate myself.
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Wish my neighborhood were as fun and active as this one. Favorite lines: “paced the parking/ lot with Buster the long-haired/ chihuahua.”
Joe was my favorite character. 🙂 The carousel of race, nationality & language/coin machines clacked/(the music of) Michelle & Tariq tangled daily & made up were satisfying to me. It was like being drawn into your satisfaction and peace at the very end.
I live in a condo surrounded by people who either want to be completely involved in my business, or avoid eye contact. Then, there is the full on alcoholic carousing at the end of the day, every day, either in the lobby, or the front porch. I have the greatest fodder there. You’ve inspired me to write about my neighborhood. 🙂
OMG-the alliteration is great in this poem-the images, the people-thanks for taking me someplace outside of me, new and exciting. I’m glad I got to visit and meet a place in your memory.
What lovely phrasing! – “gumbo of culture” and “Joe, who guzzled/his daily paycheck” and “carousel of race.” Absolutely enchanting.
Ditto to all of the above.
And I like “full crescent rainbow”
Neruda and Rilke are great companions for this lovely scene.
Such rich characters! Loved it!