Wellness Check
The lady next door is dead.
The news came to me second hand,
passed down from some sweaty boy.
A total stranger paid off with a full tank
to load his beat up truck down heavy
with the leftovers of her life.
I didn’t ask how it happened
or if there’d be a service
with some small town congregation
telling sweet stories of the dearly departed
or envisioning her heavenly home
on the streets paved with gold.
I didn’t ask because that boy
wouldn’t know no how
and because I flat-out know better.
Cause somewhere on the breeze
her spirit cussed at me,
hit like like the sharp echo
of a hard hearted fist on my screen door
a bony reminder from beyond the grave
to mind my own goddamned business.
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Sometimes bearing witness hits like a hard-hearted fist. Dang, I love the voice in this poem! Flat-out love it.
That’s some high compliment coming from you Roberta! And I’ll totally take it. 💙 You’re brilliant when it comes to bearing witness in a poetic way as well.
This is amazing. There is so much going on here, done with such efficiency. Very well done.
Why thank you so much! The lady next door would not have appreciated anything too flourishy and inefficient. Or anything at all, for that matter. Except the conclusion maybe.
And that profile pic is just positively fuckin’ elegant!
I really enjoyed that ending. This entire poem is a mood
Thank you Shaun! I’ve been slacking on commentary but enjoying your work as usual. I keep coming back to this one. It was insane how much stuff they hauled out of that itty bitty one bedroom. sheets of plywood! what the heck?
Her presence is powerful and then her voice shouts at us at the end …
Kevin
One time she cussed me out good ‘cause I gave her live in old man some tomato plants.
The ending of this poem is brilliant. I love how the poem turns away from the Hallmark version. Extremely well done!
One time she cussed me out because the mail lady put her water bill in my box. No Hallmarkage in sight. Hahah!
very nice.
bony knuckles-
screendoor slam!
Sometimes she didn’t even bother to come up on the porch, just whack on the hall window with her walking stick and blatant disregard.
Another gem from your box of jewels. Your writing is always amazing.
Too damned kind, Wendy! But I am pretty pleased with the way this one came out.
Wow—this poem is great
She was quite the “character” as we might say colloquially. Hahah! and I hope it does that justice.
yet you honored her wishes from the grave
And I sure the hell never drove across her lawn but once!
Nice! A badass poetic way of asking “Is there where I give a fuck?” Thanks for sharing.
Is it weird that in this case not giving a fuck was probably the best fuck I could give? I’d say RIP but I suspect she preferred some drama.