Fitting or Why I type
my
pen
tip
burst
a
mess
of
black
ink
on
a
white
page
slowly
sliding
downward
when
i
tried
to
write
about
you
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my
pen
tip
burst
a
mess
of
black
ink
on
a
white
page
slowly
sliding
downward
when
i
tried
to
write
about
you
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Well, I have to say this one is awesome! Fantastic, says so much in so few words and the lineation on the page is perfect. Thanks for sharing!
The form is like the spilled ink dripping down. Nicely done!
great poem: the weight of its simplicity, the preciousness each word has with its own line
I really enjoyed this.
Yes, this was genius poem. Always loved your work.
drip
Perfect.
I have a tendency to press too hard too.
Beautiful.
exactly
Love the look and the sentiment of this. Well done!
masterful!