Horse Capital
Sad to live in the horse capital of the world
and have nothing to do with horses.
It makes you feel left out,
prone to pretend you know who Oliver Lewis was
and why it’s called bluegrass
when the grass clearly isn’t blue
and why, on those cold misty mornings
when you can see the colts’ breath
as they gambol in the pasture on your right
as you drive downtown to your office,
you wonder what would happen
if you were that colt on your third birthday
with thousands of people watching
as you stand trembling at the gate,
ready to run.
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Kevin – I love how this poem develops from feeling like an outsider to being the colt. The energy at the end keeps the poem’s momentum going after one is done reading.
I adore this poem. It starts with the exterior and moves to the interior so beautifully and concisely. Very well done.
I love how the last stanza of this poem counters the statement of the first lines. You may not own a horse, but you can imagine being one!!
I enjoyed this, and thought the progression–as others have said–is really lovely and surprising
your poem let me feel the race horse’s youth. I’ve never recognized how juvenile they are
Going from your life looking out, to identification with the animal you wish you were close to (who is also looking out) is a beautiful exercise. this was seamless Kevin.