It’s What’s Inside That Counts
Long ago
Tropicana orange juice
Came in glass bottles
My mother re-used one for years
It held drinking water in our fridge
I never thought of it much
Until I came in from playing hard
From working in the fields
Or from mowing the yard
It was then
I’d come in
Drenched in sweat
Fling open the refrigerator
And grasp the bottle with desperation
I’d feel its coolness
Slippery in my hands
I’d press its chilled body against mine
Oh, did that feel fine!
Then, hastily unscrew the metal lid
Bring the bottle to my lips
Give it a hefty tilt
And let the cold water immerse
My parched mouth
And tongue
Gulping audibly
Ravenous for refreshment
Allowing water to overflow from my mouth
Dribble out the sides
And down my chin and chest
“Ahhhhhh!”
Adam’s ale, cool and fresh
After I’d had my fill
I’d wipe my mouth with
The back of my hand
And let the rest evaporate
Off my salty skin
I had effectively drained the bottle
So, I refilled and nestled
The bottle back in her cool spot
And forget, again
About her glory
Until I was very hot
13 thoughts on "It’s What’s Inside That Counts"
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I love the line “Adam’s ale, cool and fresh.” Nothing refreshes quite like a cold bottle of water.
We used those Tropicana jars the same way. Wonderful memory.
And on this hot day, thank you.
Thank you for this !
P.s. great title.
It took me until I was over 60 to appreciate water. Now I love it. This is a personal and beautiful ode to water.
I really enjoyed reading this, Carrie. Your voice is so pleasant, I’m happy to let it lead me.
I like the way the bottle sets up the detailed description
Very refreshing!
Great images and story!
Yes, a tribute to cold water on such a hot day. Ahhhh.
I felt like this poem was happening to me. So nicely done!
I love the vivid imagery that runs throughout this!
Yes!! Been there, done that!