museum
everyone avoids having hands. the artists
prefer them left just out of sight. we talk quiet
-ly amongst ourselves, so the paintings don’t hear
us as we travel through an endless series of hall
-ways. every woman is a goddess, or a woman
being chased by some dumb god. the gods
are everywhere, the gods are gods to us.
sometimes the trees look like the trees
we know. and sometimes we only know
them as trees because they say they are so
on the placard placed to the left or right
designed to explain to us what everything
in the world really means. we never even
question who they are. after all, they are
the experts, aren’t they? we take small breaks
to catch our breath, even though we only walk
slow. the world here seems so still, so crowded
and all the salomes are judiths, so there’s no dance.
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What a great first line! I also really like all of this:
“every woman is a goddess, or a woman
being chased by some dumb god. the gods
are everywhere, the gods are gods to us.
sometimes the trees look like the trees
we know. and sometimes we only know
them as trees because they say they are so
on the placard placed to the left or right
designed to explain to us what everything
in the world really means.”
I don’t love the mid-word linebreaks, though. For me they’re distracting and don’t add anything.
Hey, thanks for reading.
I have always been a little wary of mid-line breaks in general so I can easily agree. 😂
I think you captured the thoughts that follow one in a Museum…I liked the idea of “we talk quietly…so the paintings don’t hear us…” Also the dense “crowded” mood of the place comes across.
Is the “judith” you mention referencing the story of Judith slaying Holofernes–of which there are many paintings?
Thank you for your poem.
Yes, it is Judith slaying Holofernes! I’m glad someone recognized the reference.
I’ve been able to travel for the first time in my life to different cities and I always try to hit up the art museum. I’m obsessed with the play “Salomé” by Oscar Wilde and the opera by Richard Strauss. So everything I go to a museum, I look for all the Salomé paintings—but they are almost always Judith instead. I recently went to Cleveland and they had a genuine Salomé painting!