F***…idk…U title it
I watched the paraplegic move on so easily
morphing into the lion so seamlessly,
Idk what the meaning of these black and white dreams may be
in Japanese with subtitles placed underneath the speaker conveniently
in iambic pentameter with the syllables highlighted and spread out evenly
words with same pronunciation but different meanings and spellings shown frequently juxtaposed with both images so obscenely
and me dreaming I’m someone else watching me recently
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i love the idea of dreaming in verse..
love the repetition of “so”
Second consecutive poem of yours featuring the idea of seeing yourself from outside. Interesting. A through line developing here?
TBD haha
Fells so today
Feels so today
Well, your dreams seem more organized than mine are – things are black and white, convenient subtitles, strict meter, even spread. Even the title is loose while the poem is tight. Great tension! I do love me some adverbs!
Yeah , observer ……..
I like it !!!
Wish I had your lyrical abilities, Jeremy. This just trips along so nicely.
The title is so real
This has a nice flow…
What a cool poem. And I love the title!