Specimens
They took the baby from its mother
down the frigid hall of glaring lights
the beeping corridor washed out
and sterilized by white coat aliens.
Time out of mind they probed her
about passing secret diseases.
You have my blood, she said, test it
again – they sampled fluid and bone
looking for a problem to solve
and finding none, kept looking while
she sang hymns in the baby’s ear
to block the noise and held him
to block the cold until finally a new doctor
came to supervise the NICU and said why
is this healthy baby here? She threw off
the hazmat suit, left it in shreds
by the plastic crib and brought home
her baby in a car seat and her anger
inside her chest, in a fireproof box
roughly the shape of a teaching hospital.
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Mountains are made of time
and trial. Slabs of rock pushing
against each other, refusing to break.
Not all mountains become volcanoes
but these days if someone says they
know better what’s best for her own child
she remembers that she is rock solid,
opens her chest, and fans the flame.
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You nailed the ending. Intense poem. Good poem!
Thank you! The ending came first which is usually how it happens. I can’t leave it alone for the life of me, there may be a re-write or another angle of this one coming up in June
That capital Y hanging out there for no good reason. I make a lot of thumb mistakes when typing. I don’t know how to make corrections on this program.
I figured – I don’t know how to do corrections either here lol
What a powerful poem! Love the throwing off of the hazmat suit like Superwoman or Wonder Woman! Thanks for sharing!
Intimate moment showing how medicine has removed itself from its real reason – to heal not harm the patient!
That ending is a body blow.
That denouement hits just right! Your line breaks are also really great here too.
Call me Arwen. I have a FREE steak dinner at PONDEROSA award for this poem just for Y
I mean YOU
The quick tempo and biting staccato of this poem is a perfect weapon to express an inferno of “… anger in her chest, in a fireproof box roughly the shape of a teaching hospital.”
The mountain slabs of rock pushing and refusing to break is a perfect metaphor for the volcanic pressures it must take to hold the inferno ready to erupt the next time some ass opens their mouth.
Brava!
I keep reading and rereading- so powerful. That box that lives in all
our chests- ready to erupt. The stanza breaks build suspense and great flow.
why
is this healthy baby here? She threw off
the hazmat suit, left it in shreds
Trust your motherly instincts.
Great poem.