5 a.m.
and I am in Proverbs,
reading about fools and dogs
returning to their vomit.
Creaking down the stairs the teen
sits beside me at the table –
poor sleep, he says, wondering
what the consequences would be for lying
to me last night, my most pet
of all the peeves – I still haven’t decided.
He wants to know what I’m doing
I almost say looking up punishments
but think better of it
and show him the difference in translations –
King James, Jimmy, of my childhood
with his narrow margins
and the new translation I’m looking at now.
He picks up the old version, likes
how worn it feels and its flapping
broken spine. On the frontispiece
my maiden name sits indelible and the date
says I was his age
when I was given this Bible
and this Bible is the same age I was
when he was born.
14 thoughts on "5 a.m."
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The song mother and child reunion started playing softly in my mind.
Thank you for sharing this one.
I’m going to look that one up Coleman, thank you
“my most pet / of all the peeves” sounds well self-aware
<3
I like the tone of this poem. It’s balanced between reverent and irreverent. Calling King James Jimmy made me laugh! A very nice–even loving–poem.
Thank you Linda! It felt a little rude but I did it anyway lol
A lot of thoughts going on in this poem between mother and son. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for seeing that Linda
There’s a strength of voice and humor and tenderness here thats really wonderful
Thanks so much Shaun!
Arwen my favorite line was “my most pet
of all the peeves – I still haven’t decided”. Sounded like Arwentongue. I hope you are well today.
Thank you! I thought that pet peeve business was catchy lol
Lovely poem and really touching. I too like the reference to Jimmy — I chuckled. It speaks volumes about your relationship with the book. Very nice poem.
Thanks Bill!