Floating Away with His Thoughts
Lift of a kite – whimsically in pillowy
scraps & nonsensical paper
twists, trailing 8-times its length.
The peculiar Richard Babley, nicknamed
Mr. Dick, was weighed down
by the troublesome thoughts of King Charles I,
although the monarch had been recently
beheaded. The way a father
strict father can stomp over the footprint
of an eager to please son, the way
a strict math teacher quells
the contemplative questions
of a young student. Mr. Dick
schemed with David to build a kite
with long side tails trailing, embellished
with paper swatches from King Charles’
funeral. They glide like ragged bellwethers
above the rocky beach. King Charles
is finally released. Wind whips
the ascending kite, propels it toward
to the stratosphere & rewrites the script.
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love the finish, the sense of hope in this poem with the release, ascent, and your revision.
So wonderful to read your work again, Linda. As Manny says, the ascent is splendid. The whole piece is graceful.
that’s the thing-
about cats and kings…
I float on the music of these lines
The rhythm of the last stanzas has such a great varience and care to it
Nice to see this movie scene flashed out and the title is gold
Love it! Interesting that you could just be referring to the Dickens novel, and not specifically to the Dev Patel version. Makes it simpler for the reader.
I am especially fond of that version especially the kite scene and Hugh Laurie’s portrayal of Mr. Dick. Not to mention the unconventional pick of Dev Patel. A very creative version!
Strange poem, in a good way. Strong setup. Amazing ending.
Good to read your poems again!
Yes! Floating away the lift of the kite propels and rewrite the script