avian prologue
reformed harpsichord
identify and catalog this birdsong
comparing this boat neck to the guidebook figure
a ship made of wings?
(where am I going?) to no one
‘s relief to no one
‘s comprehension clinking false
champagne towards mother aphrodite sky
stranger hair spirals in collar bone pools
how long can I look?
(what do I look like?) prey
ing on rose flush forearm prey
ing on bow of white calf praying to one
day acquire normal desire (what does it mean
that the soft translucent
shoulder of a man
makes me so so sad?) ) ) )
the angle makes all the difference
in soaring fledgling or shy boxy girl
wearing peacock fascinator over virgin hair
a cherry sheen for spring garners
zero percent of the orchestra
into belly of ready linen skirt
held to catch ) ) )
pulling guts like ears
all shame ages in throat
waiting for some red
wine phrase to erupt from maturity
(would you like to dance?)
hipless short creatures should remain
in nest until called backstage
(don’t be ridiculous
we’re in a broom closet)
looks like someone
got snagged in
the moment
so deeply her dress chiffon
shredded on the thorn ) ) )
) ) )
) ) )
curling iron in mouth
candle stick in corset
wrong costume off the rack
(where am I going?)
the harpsichordist rises and gently
pushes incorrect bird off terrace
(now we can get on with the evening
(someone please read the introduction ( ( (
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Fascinating poem, there’s so much to unpack here, but it’s all so good! Especially liked “clinking false champagne towards mother aphrodite sky”
beautiful and inspiring..
if you don’t already know her, please check out joanna newsom’s music. (my high holy) i think she will speak to you.
please keep playing with form!!
i’m excited to think of where you might/could go.
Oh wow, that Joanna Newsom suggestion seems spot on! … I love “clinking false champagne” and “the soft translucent shoulder of a man” and the form with the line breaks before the ‘s is so crazy and cool! …(PS – I confused you with another River but I’m glad I asked!) Happy writing!
Wondeful and playful with the form, which serves you well here, I think.
Love the breaking lineation and risky formatting – I’m a sucker for interior space!
It is refreshing to see and hear your voice of youth development as a play within a poem. Great job…