When an Alien Race Finds What’s Left, With Any Luck
Let’s imagine they are benevolent.
Let’s imagine they are looking for something true.
Let’s imagine they almost find it here.
Perhaps the smoke will still be drifting, walls of it charging
untethered across the charred landscapes, the only remaining
witnesses, our own unblinking dead. Perhaps by then the fish
will all be belly up, hot acid ocean still moving with the moon
like a holy ghost against the silent beaches.
When those travelers arrive to inspect the rubble,
may they find our music, evidence
of the souls we carried. May they find our stories
and know we sought to understand each other.
May they find our paintings, photographs, our sculpture and poetry,
artifacts of our longing, our seeking, our endless hope. Proof that we tried
to love this place, however clumsy, however fear-driven and hate-stained, still
may the art ache with its fierce love, its faint pulse still echoing.
May this love be our final song. And when
those beings from beyond see, perhaps they will weep. They will rage
and fall down awestruck. They will see it all so clearly.
Then whatever organ equates to a heart
will stir, and so rise, cradling our ashes
in what might be thought of as hands, our ashes
that might be thought of as us, held in tenderness,
in what might be called redemption.
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This is beautiful! I love it.
This is lovely. The idea of the oceans “still moving with the moon/like a holy ghost against the silent beaches” is a wowww
Wonderful, Jasmine. Love the idea of art and love being our remnants for other races to find! I look forward to reading your work again this year!
may the art ache with its fierce love!
good to see you are at it again, Jasmine
great poem
Oh, Jasmine 💔
So so very many lines and images that sing here.
But the echoing heart of the question, throughout kills me.
👏👏👏
This is brilliant. And this sums us up so succinctly: “however clumsy, however fear-driven and hate-stained”
An anaphra-full thoughtful poem! 🌸
I love the magical three used in the anaphora, “Let’s imagine…/let’s imagine…/let’s imagine…” So evocative!
you killed me Jasmine.
dead.
first the planet.
then me.
in a happy way.