The Gift
“she said ‘when you allow me to live with you, every glance at the world around you will be a sort of salvation’ and I took her hand “
William Stafford
She said “if it’s not free, it’s not freedom”
and that if you must kill for your kingdom
your homeland will never be anything
save a mute slave shackled to the dieing.
I knew another hue had been added
to my work, knew neither joy nor sadness
and that it would bring the forks and torches.
Deep fear can breed a passion that scorches.
My muse claims to know a secret world
where the children speak the olden words.
When she whispers yellow, touches the air
I smell the sticky counter at the fair
in front of the cotton candy machine.
The pinks become glass of Rose Eglantine.
She sometimes blends color with the senses
even then the time, distance or tenses.
Beauty by name or then any measure
pointed out that any gift or treasure
requiring gratitude is not given
(transferred never freely, putrid midden)
just payment for rehearsed gratitude lines.
A clear truth had been spoken for all time.
The ancient language has no word for blue.
She said “freedom is free, my gift to you.”
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When she whispers yellow, touches the air
I smell the sticky counter at the fair
in front of the cotton candy machine.
The pinks become glass of Rose Eglantine.
Damn, Coleman, damn sir. I say, goddamn. Can I get a goddamn from the back pews? This is elegant.
The cotton candy part is my favorite too! Gorgeous.
i really like what you’re working towards here..
but these days it’s more and more clear
that ‘freedom’ is a manmade hoax…
the only thing i want, and care about it:
TRUTH
(which i think can act as freedom’s guide)
don’t the old words predate language?
presented in dance and grunting sounds…
(talk about the good old days… 🙂 )
Here’s your “goddamn”, Manny. Love everything about this, from the Stafford quote to the closing lines. Rings of truth throughout.
So well done and you stick to the rhyme well.
“Deep fear can breed a passion that scorches.” = wow. I also love a rhyming poem and you really accomplished it masterfully here
what a pretty, gentle poem. “My muse claims to know a secret world” <-love it
Stafford would be pleased.
yesterday she wrote in blue light shafts
today she whispers yellow
what a muse!
A clear truth
There is a subtle undercurrent of cynicism and magic in this poem that, for me, makes it ring as hyper-true. Very compelling work, Coleman!