He worked hard
He worked hard
after a long day at Cross Chevrolet,
Cadillac, and Buick when it
was successful, the only one
surviving in a small town
he worked hard as a farmer until the lay
of the field he sowed gave darkness, a fit
like a cover on rolling hills until seeds were one
and done, except for harrowing them down
so crows would not walk the length of the field
eating the seeds one after one until there were few
left to sprout.
As night fell, the only sapling, straight and sharp
stabbed through the 10-28 rear tire, killed
it with the anti-freeze, flowing like blood, too
soon flat and out,
and I walked off, leaving him cursing like harp
notes. I drove the ’54 Chevy even with him.
I could tell by his silence that he was surprised,
but he did not miss a beat, hooking the harrow
to the car. He said, “don’t drive too fast and tear it up.”
He watched me harrow the field until it was done.
He unhooked the chains and we rode to the house in silence.
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I really enjoyed this poem’s rhythm and concise, dense storytelling.
Thanks so much Shaun. I will read you work tonight.
do you (actually)walk as part of your writing practice?
i am pretty sure i can hear the pace of your footsteps here..
enjoyed covering this land with you…
I do, and you are very wise, hearing those sounds…
i thought so…i do too! with a little mini notebook.
it doesn’t always work, but when i can beat the words out
with my feet, it’s thrilling! and listen to my body tell me when it’s right. 🙂
love being able to measure distances in sentences, let the lay of the land dictate punctuation..
links up to the breathing while walking too… thanks for sharing.
sounds/feels like we have similar footfall:)
I enjoyed the narrative feel of this poem.