Couny line Tanka
Clays new gleaming bridge
dawn fog lit luminous red
cars slow do not stop
break through into Madison
fingernail moon points east
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Nice!
fingernail moon for the internet!
I love how you use this compressed form, can picture this in my mind’s eye!
Oh yeah.
I’m going to mentally put the T back in county for you btw. Otherwise it’s a little awkward 😜
Lol……it only took me 16 minutes to notice it was not there 😉
Fingernail moon, interesting description!
Love that last line, especially!