It’s National Donut Day
And who knew?
Driving back into the city, traffic is light. Linda might like a treat and exit 110 will take me right by West Lime on the way home. Tess Gallagher* and I made good time, we’re early so why not?
Although the line is not out the door, the woman who entered just before me has to press forward. ” Donut day ” she laughs. There is a small boy on a man’s shoulders with the easy comfort of late spring. A blonde at a two-top table with her paper cup set perfect next to her laptop brings to mind a gunslinger. Her typing is a high gear centipede in dried leaves.
The child chewing on a toy reminds me school must be out. That’s why! Except for that paperback I saw in the street, the roads felt very empty for a Friday. Two middle aged women behind me reminisce about the live concert they went to as kids. One remembers the song was acoustic, that he couldn’t hit that high note.
Where the line bends left toward glass case there is sign to the right over the heads of the customers. Written on the sign is ‘ROASTERY’ in three inch white block, to indicate a small bar with two occupied swivel-seats made of wood.
In the corner booth a woman and her son share a chocolate donut. It’s an exuberant joy. I notice that everyone in line is watching them. They notice and the moment breaks.
I grab a beanie cap from a discount display, pull it down over my pointed ears. Two cinnamon cake, two pull-aparts and a raspberry square, oh and a hat. When the order is boxed and called (I gave the name as Linda) the young woman at the counter lights up, hands me the box, says with a thousand watt grin,
“Nice hat Linda, I put an extra donut in there.”
Pushing the door open I notice that the book,
the one in the road, is still there, pages turning.
A thought crosses my mind. That’s my life,
there has to be a poem around here somewhere.
* Tess Gallagher is the name we gave to our car.
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I love the breezy quality that matches the paperback on the road, pages turning
boy on a man’s shoulders with the easy comfort of late spring! the gunslinger typist!
nice piece, Linda, or is it Tess?
great last line
I enjoyed this prosey poem, these dense details, but my favorite was “Her typing is a high gear centipede in dried leaves.”
So much fun in this poem. This is chapter 6 in a zen guide to living. Thank you!
Loved reading this little slice of life. Also loved the high gear centipede in dried leaves.
donutshop as forest-
i see what you did there.
a story of sugar and wood.
Yes !!!!!
nice shape. looks like a bite has been taken out of the poem!
love:
Pushing the door open I notice that the book,
the one in the road, is still there, pages turning.
The centipede was my favorite – I saw a picture of a madwoman with multiple screens and touch surfaces: phone, tablet, laptop – a water in a BPA free container, a fru-fru drink, coffee and a bear claw. Manipulating all.
Love it, Coleman! It’s totally unnecessary for me to know, as I happen to, which doughnut shop this is. What I take from this is that you are a born poet, capable of seeing the poetic possibilities of almost any situation. The world is your oyster and your next poem, just waiting to happen.
the ultimate be here now poem. Ram Dass would be happy!
Those closing lines, so sweet and true.
what a great eye you have
poetry is mainly the art
of observation
What honor you bring to the glorious donut! Everyone is happy around donuts. I agree with the others that you have an eye to make a poem from keen observations. Love that you named your car! We had a friend in Texas who named his motorcycle Carver after Raymond C.
I read this yesterday but did not have a chance to write then, and ever since one image has stayed in my mind’s eye:
“Pushing the door open I notice that the book,
the one in the road, is still there, pages turning”
I keep seeing those pages…! I love this poetic telling, so rich with story
! thank you!
I love riding alongside this morning with you.
And… the ties to the left book.