On a Louisiana River, Early Morning
after Czelaw Milosz and James Wright
Two small herons with yellow feet
circle their nest. A fish flips
into the air. I am fully awake.
Dragonflies flutter, blue, lime green.
Water striders spiral. Cypress knees
cluster around their mothers. I feel
the sun’s heat. The great white heron’s
neck never straightens, its wings pull it,
like Icarus, to earth where it touches
a branch, then soars again. My heart
opens. A bullfrog croaks, once.
In green shadows, trees, moss, leaves
stand tall. I have not wasted my life.
7 thoughts on "On a Louisiana River, Early Morning"
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Wow wowing.
Libby,, the depth if detail is wonderful.
The form and shape is perfect for this.
I can even heat your voice in the titleand attribution.
Perfection.
I came to the same conclusion as this poem Love it.
A 10 on the landing.
Gorgeous and measured detail, love “its wings pull it,/like Icarus, to earth where it touches/a branch, then soars again.”
Positively painted with precision!
Love the humble snapshot of self juxtaposed with Louisiana wildlife! Inspired.
Beautiful, Libby! Gorgeous details, and nice to see you flip Wright on his head in the end.
The last line is such a beautiful nod to Wright. I’m as confident about Milosz
but he’s very philosophical. Im going to crack open a big fat volume of his work and brush up. We are posting at different times of the day — me in the morning and you at night — but I follow more of your posts.
I’m sorry about the typos. I do want to track your posts.
Yes, it’s all about paying attention