When the Rain Comes
They spent the weekend in a suite
at the new Omni Hotel,
an anniversary gift from her parents,
five years in already,
and they’ve done pretty well, thank you.
A few bumps, one or two nights
he slept on the couch,
but that’s to be expected, everyone says.
No kids yet, but one day, one day.
It wasn’t a nice night for a stroll,
storm clouds above while the wind
toyed with a plastic water bottle
along the curb. At one point she saw
what might have been a rat
hugging the side of the Plasma Center
on Muhammad Ali,
but she had her husband’s strong arm to hold onto
and they would complete the circuit in good time,
go back to a booth in the lounge,
put another round of cocktails on the room,
her parents were paying for everything.
The first fat, cold raindrops soaked into the sidewalk.
They picked up the pace and hurried along,
turning the final corner,
the hotel entrance just ahead,
rushing past a legless man, jeans pinned
below the knees, collecting his sign
and metal can: the hollow clunking
of few coins inside.
The sound filled her with sadness,
and as she was spun through the revolving door,
she felt aggravated at the man
for raising those feelings
on her romantic weekend.
She couldn’t have known his little dog Arthur,
his near constant companion on this corner of sidewalk,
had recently died.
Or that he was already looking to get another.
The missing legs gets sympathy, he’d of told her,
if she had stopped and gotten real. But it’s the pet
that separates people from their money.
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Somber, grounded slice-of-life. Nicely done.
I enjoyed the storytelling of this poem
The rat is really the turn in this poem! A great scene of privilege and poverty.
The poem takes the reader through a beautiful journey.
I love how she is unwilling to accept the dose of perspective the encounter could have given her. Very real.
Bill, something about dogs this year. Something about dogs. The truth about how they pull on a heart more than the sight of a human, There is something so sardonic about this poem, whilst touching at the end. I don’t know how you do it.
Perspective… yes.
yes, the poem makes me aware that most of us most of the time would not have “stopped and gotten real”
The contrast between the woman and the legless man is written so well. She’s upset that he’s ruining her night…and yes, animals sure do pull the heartstrings, but the fact that the man would have told it that particularly cold way…”it’s the pet that separates people from their money” says something about a darkness in all of us as humans. Maybe they’re more alike than we first imagine. Great piece.
I am in awe of your ability to routinely produce such well-crafted poetry leaving us readers totally invested in the people you write about.