Who’s there?
Our life together:
planning dinner,
memorizing the route
between our kid’s school
and therapy,
trips to the pet store
for designer dog food,
buying new underwear,
tossing out the old.
Don’t get me wrong,
what we have —
roof overhead, brass in pocket,
thirty day moon —
is good, in the way
a nosebleed
is an indicator
you’re still among the living,
but
I long for the firm knock
against ribcage
of the lover wanting in.
6 thoughts on "Who’s there?"
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This is deep and probing stuff, Bill. I admire your ability to go there.
(after road trip & g.children
I finally get to sit in the morning
and read wonderful verse)
great piece
but don’t worry
there’ll be the empty nest
and then the (g)olden years!!!
I like the examination of the mundane and magic ways we can connect. Nice writing, Bill.
A very honest confession of a universal thought. The ending cinches it.
A true look at a life – what we have/what we want. You are a born poet!!
That’s so kind of you Sylvia, thanks. Some days though I wonder.