Playing at the Edge
Lake Michigan’s shore, summer
after eighth grade, we walk
out of spindly legs
into widening hips, enter
a new age — bodies strange,
slightly dangerous,
cross paths with some boys, couple
years older, muscles
like grown men or lions
who might pounce.
They cruise by on bikes,
feast their eyes on us.
Later, the ringleader,
shaggy mane, electric
blue gaze, calls out
to us from the water,
Come on, don’t you want
to swim deeper?
We giggle and decline,
but it’s the last time
not one of us will dare
dip a toe.
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Fantastic coming of age poem, Chelsie. Love the suggestive “don’t you want / to swim deeper?” and the last two couplets are perfect.
Wonderful, Chelsie!
lovely poem
title is right on
couplets serve well
“is this what some
call the age of reason?”
Enjambment and couplets work very well here!
Love how this captures that last moment of self-preservation before they will lose their minds for a few years, as we all do.
Great details, and you evoke that time of life so well.
Loved the spindly legs and widening hips! You say so much with so few words! Wonderful poem!
Love this!