Breaking the Rules
after Tom Hunley’s the Poetry Gymnasium
I Will Never Show You
only tell you
how to break eggs
without getting a fleck
of shell in your omelette
This art calls for an incantation
to a higher being
and a savage use of science
~~~an eruption of membrane
Breathe, you must, three times,
deep, let yourself go;
go inward to where the embryo
waits for the perfect crack
along the rib of the skillet
Ms. Yolk waits for you
to mix the matter of her life
into a messy goo
waits for the fiery elements
to metamorph her into a substance
that will become your body,
the holy communion of your morning
I will never show you
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I adore this so very much.
The boundary has been set! As well as the standard.
I don’t know why you won’t show us. Seems very rude 😏
But you told us very well, so we can’t complain.
“Breathe, you must, three times,” – very Yoda-ish! Love how you handle Ms. Yolk’s transformation to the holy.
“waits for the fiery elements
to metamorph her into a substance
that will become your body,
the holy communion of your morning” <I love this so much!
Ooooo, I love how this quick moment we all know is s t r e t c h e d out inside the mind. Love how poetry can do that. Thanks again for another wonderful poem!
This is wonderful!! I love the reference to holy communion.
Way to take it there!