Indiscreet Conclusions of the Cup
of my specific utility, the fine gloss
nickel carbonate and trapped fire
have given me. She will never be blue-glazed
or darkened by burnt umber. Cannot bend
and crystallize like a half-pipe or bake slowly
at 2,000 degrees. The protons and electrons of my
thingness can never schedule her appointments
or sort her socks. But I can make space for fresh milk,
dark roast or chilled juice. My paradise
is to encircle warm ginger and Oolong tea.
I can always wait for the tea kettle’s song but
the distracted woman will never know my painless
shattering or my cold-sober complacency. My submission
to flame is as infinite as her recklessness.
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I’m envious of how you use enjambment in this piece. I’ve always struggled with how it is used to construct individual lines without interrupting the work’s flow and you do great with it.
Yes, the enjambment is really good on this.
Great poem.
Beautifully structured mirroring.
Amazing really.
🙂
Such a creative point of view and gorgeous word choices.
Beautiful, Linda. In awe of where this cup took you.
A poem narrated by a cup with a tendency to complain! Delightful and imaginative. .
I love the personification and fine details in this poem! “the rapture/of my specific utility” is just one gorgeous moment
totally awesome
the cup speaketh
(from tater knob?
maybe Sarah speaks
through you)
Love the whimsy, the imagination of this poem. Dense with gorgeous lines:
“She will never be blue-glazed
or darkened by burnt umber.”
“But I can make space for fresh milk,
dark roast or chilled juice.
My thingness…… !!!
Very crafty!
“My submission
to flame is as infinite as her recklessness.” Dang, that’s good!