Bird Watching with My Teenage Son
That green heron we watched
preening in the top of the sweet gum
was the best part of my day.
The way your excitement rushed out,
words tumbling over themselves
as you spotted it
just like when you were learning to speak
and couldn’t push sounds out quick enough
to keep up with delight, your body quaking
as you narrated its movements.
Its neck extending periodically,
then tucking back under its wing,
feathers a shadow
ruffled against the indigo sky.
And us, on the ground joined in awe until
it sprang from the branch and was gone.
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This is lovely, Amy – from the description of excitement, the sense of your son as a toddler, the awe, and then the flying away. I especially like the way you describe his speech.
I agree with Nancy, love how you hinge this scene around your son “learning to speak/and couldn’t push sounds out quick enough”
A beautiful sight well described. I can see it! I love “preening in the top of the sweet gum” “indigo sky” “joined in awe” and “sprang from the branch”
It could be because I’m a lifetime birdwatcher… but it conveyed well to me that sheer excitement and privilege of witnessing nature.