unedited
i want to right
this
poem
the words just
seem so
wrong
You not be-
ing
Us not grey-
ing
We not laugh-
ing
twenty-five years
the truth still
the same
&
reality won’t
let me
right
this
damn
poem
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❤️ I feel the pain in this poem. The “you not being, us not greying, we not laughing” part is really powerful
I agree with Jess. Also appreciiate the way you use of homophones to do double duty here!
that ampersand! and the space it holds…
Thanks y’all❤️