Palette
I watched a cardinal land
amidst a thicket
along the roadside
while I waited
for the light to change,
his red and my red
speaking to one another
the way elements
of some still-life do.
The light did change,
he flew away,
as I passed beneath
pool felt green,
I thought how like
attracts like,
I’m drawn to the dour plum,
others to the golden light
angling in
from an unseen window.
When I think of my poor wife,
how unhappy she must be.
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That is my favorite poem you’ve written all summer. Total awe of your mastery of color and metaphor, color and character, color and image. Then a sudden turn where I feel the heart of your poem scream that you are also unhappy. Dude, can I buy you coffee on Sunday?
Of course you may! And thanks!
Deft hand,
Brushstrokes visible.
Still life and it’s still life
and still, you are a master of the craft.
“pool felt green” is a color that I will add to my own palette.
Thank you sir.
I love how you move from outside yourself to inside in this poem. The gorgeous natural description hinging on “I thought how like/attracts like,” is so compelling
Wow
how the palette
turns from bright
at the end.
As a reader you have me.
The ending. Wow!
I like the progression of this poem, how the cardinal, the traffic light, their colors all lead you to think of your wife and how unhappy you think she is. Great job, Bill.
Wow.
The colors danced in the beginning. Connections made. And then they darkened and seemingly held less connection to the other color, but strongly to the people involved.
Such a great flow as well.
Ah Bill, what a fine and powerful poet you are. Your work just keeps getting better, deeper and more moving.