My Dream Trip to Gilligan’s Island
The blue atoll lagoon,
sweet salted air
sun warmed sand
my feet cool in the waters
angel fish nibble toes
small swells roll up
then down the shore
a man lounges
under the shade of a palm
a coconut washes up
I reach down
pluck it from the water
fish taste good
cooked over a fire.
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Wonderful! Say hi to the Professor and Mary Ann!
Ditto! I like how you transition from description into actions after the fourth line.
I need to go there right now! Great piece.
Nice! I want to go too.
I like those nibbling fish
Utterly relaxing. Thanks for taking us with you to the island!
Thanks everyone! This is from the Rattle Prompt. Something to break up my morose! Need more Island time!