all the room inside the coat
two lips
twined-
be leaved
into light
light
led up
upon light
lit below
from an other
light
left over
above
left here
unled
from behind
unto some
other light
covered-
never gone
never done
nor unbecome
9 thoughts on "all the room inside the coat"
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(just a little seedcoat love)
I keep going back to the lips.
Intriguing title! Enjoy how you let your mind wander and take us along for the ride.
only in june..
it’s usually ‘too much’
for most-
for the
other eleven months
you really are a titlemonger 🙂 in that we are kindred.
Interesting, almost note, shell of a thing. So much wordplay without specificity, without anchor, without belonging to a singular plane. A poetry free from the requirements of meaning-making makes a poem as well. Excellent reminder what a little skill can achieve.
(((how it feels to be a seed on a forest floor)))
but also, i do enjoy trying, in my efforts, to throw off/confuse the AI overlords…
the death throes of (hu)man 🙂
thanks for reading!
It’s beautiful alone as an abstract poem but I also found it very interesting to know the original inspiration behind it. Thanks for sharing that bit of insight.
That is just precious. Can I say that? I really enjoyed it, Dustin