Kentucky Heaven
Heaven without honeysuckles—soft,
golden light—is no kind of place for angels.
Such a flat-fragranced land, a dusty, dry
tumbleweed of a neighborhood seems
more fit for graceless devils. Give me
humid mountains cloaked in kudzu
ribbons, the rattled swell-hush of jar flies
big as blue collar fingers. Give me
lightning bugs hovering their cosmos
just above grass blades at dusk, and a long,
wide road with no signs save a cross and silk
chrysanthemums gripping its guardrail
with rusted wire. If heaven is the last stop
in forever, it had better be Kentucky
caught in the promise of June and July—
its vines heavy with sweet blackberry heads
and eternal honey sips of sunshine.
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What a skillfully eloquent poem. There’s good argument here for this being the state song. I enjoy the way you craft specificity. The coolest element here is that you are able to write: “a long, / wide road with no signs save a cross and silk / chrysanthemums gripping its guardrail / with rusted wire.” and not go into some emotional bathos-ridden monologue, but keep it as an object worthy of praise. As if it were simply a feature of the landscape, which, realistically it is. But it is remarkable here because you refuse to simplify it to some overwrought drivel. Great poem!
Thank you! I do my utmost to avoid drivel. 🙂
I love “is no kind of place for angels.” Great poem!
Thank you!
You not only captured Kentucky well in this poem, but especially Eastern Kentucky.
That’s wonderful to hear—especially as an Eastern KY native. 🙂
Beautiful imagery that teases the senses.
Thank you!
There are so many excellent images, but the poem would not be as powerful without the return to the word honeysuckles at the beginning and the art of sucking the blooms to enjoy the honey at the ending of this dandy…