Tool
I remember the day you moved out,
how your women’s circle came
to provide support and strong arms,
how they cornered me in the kitchen,
isolated, contained, as if I was virus,
contagion.
One by one the women
carried boxes out into the light,
until just you at last, a mumbled That’s that.
I offered all I had left, shower curtain rings,
believing my charity might win
you back.
The six of you gathered
in the driveway for a group hug
and a prayer to the goddess of the rock,
while I stood on the front porch,
useless, past-tense, a man
and his damnable cock.
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Poetry !!!!
‘Shower rings’
Damn! This a great a poem and excuse the joke but this one “penetrates. Your point of view is unique to you but also speaks to a lot of people.
That’s got a stiff upper cut brother 😉
*reaches for another slimjim*
That rhyme in the last stanza is so effective and really ties the entire poem up so well! Great poem.
I especially love the movement of the women–circling, cornering, carrying, mumbling, hugging–while you stand unmoving
Pretty much good for nothing. ; )
wow
last stanza/line
a killer
(I was in a similar
scene 35 y. ago)
this struck nerve
Really good work
Damnably fine comedy here, although it must have felt like tragedy at the time. Maybe it still does.
Amazing and hits deep.
This one shows pain and vulnerability so well!
DAMN
Those last few lines! Envy and self-hatred (not necessarily in equal parts). Those lines make the poem.