Catch
just like you, the stubborn
clock refuses to budge
sixteen hours now
and this final inning
bases are loaded
this kid on the other team
hits a pop fly – up, up up!
the kind of thing that
could split the seams. doc says,
he’s a big boy, I’m worried
he might be stuck, heart rate’s
dropping. she gets the forceps
makes you lift your glove
like a golden torch
near third base, steady, steady,
squint into the sun
everyone holds their breath
but there’s no time after all
before it all barrels down
in a sudden, white-hot rush
as spectating eyes bounce
ball to glove, ball to glove,
and finally, here comes
that satisfying thud
the beating heart, those sure,
strong lungs, and you,
a dream in her hands
crying now
an eruption of joy.
you’re so good at this thing
that you’ve always done,
keeping my heart in my throat.
13 thoughts on "Catch"
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Oh, this strums the heart strings. I like the form quite a bit.
echo bill re: form.
a wild (effective) mix
of metaphors too 🙂
Yup echo and echo.
Love the form.
Great poem.
The two threads of this poem come together and speak to each other so well!
Yes, as Shaun says, and I love how that last stanza works for both threads.
tension Chelsie was sweet and the release a mixed bag – joy and remembering being on the edge of your seat.
Echo all of the above as writer, reader, mom, and grandmom.
great read
Fantastic contrapuntal! The emotion is overpowering.
This so well crafted! It kept me on the edge of my seat.
Wow – so much wow! The structure and jumping between worlds/ times/ memories/ fears/ joy-
it’s completely wonderful
Exquisite! Form and tension so well crafted!
Oh, Chelsie! I was LITERALLY beaming during the last third of this beautiful poem.
How creative!!!! The structure and reflection of the “sides.”
I often parallel the struggle and excitement and immediate overwhelming love that came laboring my daughter into this world, while watching her thrive or do something amazing (soccer moments and moments of profound thought and expression and her kindness).
Very much allowed me to revisit those moments and appreciate.
This is so beautiful. One of my favorites. Great work girl!!!