Pears of My Youth
Bartlett, Anjou, Bradford, Bosc,
all just fine as far as they go—
but nothing next to the pears
of my youth from Aunt Lila’s
gnarly old tree, their shapes
bulbous & homely, their thick skin
dark & mottled like a parchment
treasure map, their juice earthy
& ancient with a tang of rust.
I’d pull one down from a cloud
of wasps, gnaw it to the core
& pop even that in my mouth,
grind it with my teeth until
nothing was left but the seeds
I’d spit on the ground: my first brush
with a hunger beyond hunger,
a desire beyond desire. Then
I’d brave the yellowjackets again
& steal more pears, my sweet tooth
just as ravenous as theirs.
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“dark & mottled like a parchment treasure map, their juice earthy & ancient with a tang of rust.” < not only taste but texture perfectly described. I want a pear now!
Me too, Chelsie!
Love this poem, so luscious, so full of longing. Love the imagery of “their thick skin
dark & mottled like a parchment
treasure map, their juice earthy
& ancient with a tang of rust”
and those ravenous yellowjackets.
Thanks, Karen!
love that the tree was “gnarly” and that her name was “Lila”
Thanks, Gaby! I hadn’t picked up on that bit of consonance myself. Good eye.
Gnarly Lila sounds like a fun character to write about. haha!
There is a long Lilas. My 10-year-old niece, Lila, is a hearty peach. Beautiful, Kevin!
I meant to say “a long tradition of Lilas.”
Thanks darlin. I do love that name.
Your poetry is expansive, passionate, insightful–and valued. Nice writing, as always, Kevin!
What a wonderful compliment, Laura! Thank you!
This is luscious, Kevin. And I love where the poem takes me – from gnarly to delicious and then to hunger and risk. I wonder if it was a Kiefer pear? That’s what we grow, because they are good canning pears. but pretty ugly to look at.
Thanks, Nancy! I never knew, or maybe just can’t remember, what kind they were. I just know they tasted totally different from supermarket pears. Even today, just in memory, they make me salivate. My mother did can some of them but I never cared for those. It was fresh off the tree or nothing.
completely lovely!
Thanks, Leah!
You pack a lot of meaning in this poem- more than pears! Love it.
Thanks, Linda! I do try 😉
I appreciate how you’ve taken something so simple and given it to the reader to taste and feel, and then you broaden it with “a hunger beyond hunger.” I like also how this reminds me of growing up next door to a gooseberry bush.
Thanks, Sue! (I love gooseberries too.)
You know, I think pears get underrated at times! They are so luscious and sweet. You are courageous to brave the yellow jackets. Ouch! We had a pear tree and the fruit would be spotted and misshapen, but wow what a treat!
Thanks, Sylvia!
I like the speaker’s willingness to face challenges and take risks in pursuit of their desires. I’m hungry for a pear now, nice one Kevin!
Thanks, Jeremy!
This one struck a chord with me, Kevin. My grandmother had a huge, old pear tree in backyard back home in Pennsylvania. My mother kept these stone figurine pears in her house to remind her of it. When my wife and I were first married, of course we bought a house that just happened to have a pear tree in the back. Pears are a recurring symbol in my family, and I have included them in a few of my poems. None as well written as this.
Thanks, Lee. You’re confirming my suspicion that pear trees are special, with a special magic.
I live the repetition upon repetition of “my first brush/with a hunger beyond hunger,/a desire beyond desire.”
It really builds the tension so well.
Thanks, Shaun!
This is absolutely one of my favorites of the season! Such a powerful memory—taste. All the senses are alive in this piece, and you’ve captured so much in such a brief space. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks, Jessica!
brings back pear-eating memories!
Love:
their thick skin
dark & mottled like a parchment
treasure map, their juice earthy
& ancient with a tang of rust.
Thanks Pam!
Mmm! The fruit of life in this one. I love the word play
Thanks Sam!
My love of pears come back to me through your words, yellow jackets and all…
Thank you!
This is wonderful, Kevin! I love it!
Thank you so much, Melva!