Upgrading From a Tropical Depression to a Fully Fledged Hurricane
For what good is a story
if the protagonist never grows?
I am storm clouds stacked on a warm ocean lesson
preparing to become your next supervillain
with surges to strike at all of your levees
and downpours ready to flood all your cities.
I’ll blacken your skies like a guillotine,
finding immortality on your quivering shores
my name clinging like an unwise tattoo;
you’ll carry me with you the rest of your days.
For I’ve learned the difference between ‘we need to talk’
and I need to talk to you is stark.
You can’t willy-nilly play games
with other peoples’ hearts.
It’s the wind speed I need to evolve into my own.
No more cowering, afraid to get hurt.
Because I am hurt. I shoulder many hurts
and I need to ensure you won’t hurt me anymore
and I can only do that
as a monster in your distant dark.
My advice to you now?
Brace yourself; take shelter.
Landfall is coming,
I will talk to you soon.
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wow, this floors me- I can FEEL the electricity jumping off these words. Literal goosebumps. Everything is arcing. The metaphor of the gathering, hurting storm is incredible.
“I can only do that as a monster in your distant dark.”
Scary poem.
I love how this poem poses the question to start: “For what good is a story/if the protagonist never grows?” Then the repetition of “Because I am hurt. I shoulder many hurts” is powerful
Love this in couplets.
It builds and the foem allows oxygen to reach the core shadow of it.
And it builds.
Great closing.
Vulnerable heart wrenching relationship poem. Love the couplets.
“I will talk to you soon”
at the end.
Yes, as Kevin says, “scary”
I’ve like your poems this month,
they’re intriguing
I love the buildup and that ending!
For I’ve learned the difference between ‘we need to talk’
and I need to talk to you is stark.
WOW.