woodsoak
some sounds so and so slowly
we nearly meet moving through
sometimes at the same speed going
out-grown and grown for groaning
every step (some sink in)
hover some (a little lower)
the pace of rot
is set by rain
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the attention to sibilance, and other consonants in the alliteration make this very lovely to read aloud dustin.
can-you-do-it-all-in-one-breath 🙂
Lovely sounds throughout. (I could do it in one breath, though pained by the end. )
Such solid sibulant simulation syncopated
space-decks Cap’n.
I got through it but just barely….
Fun 🙂 thanks dustin
i like so many of yours,
this one holds a special place.
I’ll be coming back to it
Lovely consonant sounds.
Love the sounds. So playful and humorous!
The sounds and rhythm are so on point.
Love the play with sounds.