I’m Half Inside and Half Outside Myself Today
The temperature soars
and I’ve so much work to do.
The home ground shifts before my eyes.
Stones are melting and purslane is taking
my garden, edible but frightening, too,
for the bugs are eating everything
as first leaves emerge, except the purslane.
Nothing usual works. If I resort to seven dust,
it’ll feel like defeat. I don’t want defeat,
I want green plants in my garden.
I need fruits and vegetables
like I need hills and rivers.
I want wild and tame,
together.
18 thoughts on "I’m Half Inside and Half Outside Myself Today"
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Great gardening dilemma!
Thanks, Linda.
it’s an artistic choice
I wish untitled didn’t come
up in the title space
I wish it was blank
(Sorry Melva
above comment was
meant as my response
to Linda about my entry)
Your poem
certainly catches the
delema of gardening this season!!!
No problem.
Thanks, Jim.
Great piece! I love the tension of inside/ outside… tame and wild 🙂
Thanks, Leah.
Love the contrast expressed through gardening “woes” and decisions to make. Wild/tame. What a great conclusion.
Thanks, Mary.
Opening line says it all
And more so today!
I’m empathizing! “I want wild and tame, / together.” Nice!
Thanks, Michele.
Love this poem and it’s conclusion. Also: “purslane is taking /my garden, edible but frightening, too,”
I made a salad of the purslane and Mr Man didn’t bat an eye! Thanks, Shaun.
Love the way this poem moves to its wonderful conclusion:
“I want green plants in my garden.
I need fruits and vegetables
like I need hills and rivers.
I want wild and tame,
together.”
I say hell yes, to the hills and rivers, the wild and tame.
Thanks, Karen.
I love this title!
Love:
Stones are melting and purslane is taking
my garden
I want wild and tame,
together.