The Last Supper, a Dream Poem
When I run out of things to say,
you’ll eat me.
To you, words are condiments,
like mustard.
You’re a silly army of hungry caterpillars
topping cross cake with cherry compote.
You’ll be food for the Eagle unless
you step away from the table.
This advice I offer
as your friend.
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love how concisely you work food description, wisdom, and tone into a set of five couplets. title is also wonderful
This poem is very surreal, I love vivid and unconventional imagery, very nice.
Yup I was gonna say surrealism too.
and the 4th wall ending address is awesome.
that was hilarious!
Felt quite surreal to me, too.
Last words made me shiver. Well done! (puns unintended)
Love it. I really like dream poems for the way they don’t make sense but then they do make sense.
Wild!
Thank you all for your kind comments. I never know if the surreality works or whether further details will make it clearer or more obscure.
Fun!