early cool
in the magic
of this early cool
you ask me to sit with you
and listen to the Bee Buzz
under the super-bloom
of Sweet Mimosa,
your internal decible
meter rates the vibration
higher than our refrigerator
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precise description that places me in the scene smelling, listening, feeling. all the senses working. nice one.
Delicious
Very nice. Love mimosa trees. We had one we called the butterfly singles bar. As I read this I could hear the bees buzz and smell the flowers.
Love it !
And so much unsaid that being there and not are so well handled.
Nice.
All the senses made this so beautiful!
I love that level of knowing and specificity in this writing–
A master weaver of the sensuous!
I love the twist in the last line.
So tender and sensuous.
Super bloom of sweet mimosas! Yummmm
Oh, how lovely!
Such few words and yet I was there with you. Incredible!
Great sensory images.
I love the last line so much! it flows I want to read it again 🙂
So fun–love “superbloom”!