Skyfall
Birds watch skyfall slowly.
You are around wrapper on caramel,
and shapes dip, pitch, and reverse.
Wrapped on we flow rounds until
sleep and clouds shower their meteors
into greeting rays of sun when alarm goes off,
but I say no to the headboard in three successive
pops! and you laugh, happy to oblige—
the price of exhaustion approaches drowning
in chocolate, salt, and cherries.
I see smoke rising from the oaks,
the rise of heat has not fired us
from the night’s spent shards into new pots
which I fill with grain for the bird between us.
She sings madly. Truly, her deep train whistle
signals derailment, eyes rolling in her head,
hands clutching the ground to stop her plummeting.
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need to read this again after coffee, but pretty sure i love it already..
now i wonder if this is a nod to another bowie…
‘station to station'(?)
like linda, i want to know more about the bird… but not too much more… i like the not knowing…
nah, it’s a straight up shag poem
bird is bird. right on!
I like the upside down nature of this poem. Topsy turvy
At first I thought this poem was about sex in a car! But I’m pretty sure it’s a comment about sex. I’m not sure! I Iove: “smoke rising from the oaks/the rise of heat has not fired us…” And I really the concept of the “bird between us.” That bird a voice! What does it say? I love the notion of Skyfall but a more literal title that gives a little more about the poem would help me. Maybe it’s all clear but I’d still like a windshield wiper. What are you saying and why are you
saying it! As always, a compelling piece.
Like Linda, I really responded to “I see smoke rising from the oaks,/the rise of heat has not fired us…” Srmtunning descriptions.
Closing the evening and then again in the morning!
Whew. Like the oaks, I am steaming.
Hahaha this is incredible!! my fav line “She sings madly. Truly, her deep train whistle”
somehow I think that Eirill is only one who got the joke