Miles to Go
Because I don’t know how my car works,
I pray to it like the ancients to the sun.
Hallowed be thy name, Toyota Corolla.
Please get me there, both of us in one piece,
and if you do I’ll sacrifice some green leaves
to buy you oil and a new air filter and maybe
even tires, oh car god. I must seem so slow
to you, so close to the junkyard, and it’s true
that the fast lane now seems far away just as
eighteen seems far away.
I have rust, chipped paint, a rebuilt engine.
When we get there, the ground looks at me
hungrily, like its mouth yearns to swallow me,
and the streetlights shine in my eyes,
the green a flashlight
that spots the problem,
the yellow a dim waiting room light,
flickering as I fill out insurance forms,
the red a doctor’s bleary eyes
as he says I should sit for this.
18 thoughts on "Miles to Go"
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I love the humor of this piece.
Humor? This is a poem about my impending death.
Oh. That last line, so ominous. Then I loop back to title. But . . .
Nice subtle change in focus–and addressees.
“so close to the junkyard” — what an especially great line. What a great poem.
Thanks Michele.
One thing I admire about your writing is how you get at the heart of things in unique ways: “the ground looks at me/hungrily, like its mouth yearns to swallow me” is an image that will stick with me
Thanks Shaun. I appreciate your attentive eyes on my drafts this month.
i’ll never look at a set of stoplights the same after this.. :)/:(
thanks for this.
Ha, thanks.
Mmmm nice. And sad. The last couplet is really good… I feel for you/speaker and also the tired doctor delivering the news. … I also like the direct address to your Toyota! 🙂
Thanks Emily.
My first thought was the Wittgenstein joke: If your car doesn’t work, it must be a language problem. But pretty quickly this is an I-am-my-car issue. Which is true in ways people may not like to admit. *my check engine light is on BTW and I don’t just mean the Yaris. So I get this. This is reality. Well done.
I hadn’t heard that Wittgenstein joke. Good one.
awesome poem, I feel ya
Thanks Mike!
Sobering – especially the last line.
Thanks Wayne.
Ominous, Tom. I hope this poem doesn’t mean what I think it does.
Nah. I have miles to go. Not sure how many, though.