4.
coasting down the hill
(across the county line)
(across the county line)
they fill the ditch
(on either side)
these days he sees that
(only going one way)
was worth much less more
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working title: way back- then
Neat construction.
It holds us in and then releases
Interesting use of parentheses. Feels a little cummingsesque.
I agree that the poem feels like it’s written with an ee cummings-type of awareness. I’m appreciating how are filled with a few more brushstrokes this year.
Nice:
was worth much less more
the reader rides
along
coasting
down the hill