Riding shotgun on the freeway
I catch sight of a rust-hued heap,
small, furred blur on the shoulder.
No run-of-the-mill roadkill,
it makes my gut churn, head turn,
eyes track back until they alight
on the white spots of a stricken fawn.
Nature’s dapples, camouflage
for the young, never fathomed
danger shaped like a speeding car.
I say, I wish I hadn’t seen that,
but I don’t believe me. It hurts
to look, but someone should
notice this gentle waste
of a pretty face, long-lashed
eyelids like windows
shuttered for eternal sleep,
her one shy crime to wander
greenly, happen by mistake
upon this harsh, fast place
we paved in the name of progress.
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What a beautiful, heartbreaking and relevant poem to wake up to this morning. Your poetry is getting so good!
I say, “I wish I hadn’t seen that,”
but I don’t believe me.
Chelsie that was raw. Then you state someone should witness the weight of consequence. (my words). It is well said. A mixture of delicacy in death, and heaviness to boot.
run of the mill roadkill.
great poem of
when the horrifying
becomes banal
Yeah, I would have been troubled by that sight as well. A fawn just followed its mother in our yard a few days ago. Such a beautiful sight. I loved this poem, Chelsie.
“someone should/notice this gentle waste/of a pretty face” is such a truthful group of lines. Really masterful work.
Heartbreaking, Chelsie! And so, so well done.
You share your tender heart and soul with us so skillfully
especially love “wander / greenly”
Wow! Heartbreaking and beautiful.
And this brought me to tears:
but someone should
notice this gentle waste
of a pretty face, long-lashed
eyelids like windows
shuttered for eternal sleep,
her one shy crime to wander
greenly, happen by mistake
upon this harsh, fast place
we paved in the name of progress.
beautiful. my favorite line is, “i dont believe me. it hurts / to look, but someone should / notice this gentle waste of a pretty face”
Yes! Someone should notice, as you say so well in this poem.
Beautifully rendered terrible moment- I especially admire, “her one shy crime”. Unexpected and precise.
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