Birdstar Dreams of Water
In the morning I wake
to the red
hot sunrise to find myself
daydreaming.
Let me drink of cool water
and simultaneous
chattering birdsong.
This is not my dream.
The bird is dreaming me.
There is no bird or me,
there is only water and thirst.
The vision’s sudden awareness
ends in a fluorescent
blinding that wakes itself.
The dreamer is
fashioned of smooth stone.
A blue jade water ladle,
the handle, by hand,
carved into a bird.
The ladle itself is a dream
of the small dipper that hangs
over the celestial basin,
a bright bird on its handle.
The constellation itself does not exist.
It is the dream of the bird star.
Who is now still, as always
unmoving. Alert and watching,
dreaming and thirsty,
and awake.
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Beautiful braiding of the bird and a dream with lovely images – simultaneous chattering birdsong.
There is no bird or me, there is only water and thirst– and all a dream of a star? Lovely, you aren’t weaving the terrestrial with a dream, you go beyond to claim it all begins on a cosmic conscious level. One time, at band camp….
hahaha
this comment is opening a lot of doors…
That second stanza is incredible! The whole poem is fantastic.
i’m sure you already know it’s a ‘yes’ from me.
it’s getting to be that time of month where all our
notebooks have scribbles about birds
on everyother page. (the best time of year!)
the return of finches and warblers.. :!!
(as thistle and chicory mature)
to you little yellow ladies-
the floor i yield…
I love the poem and I especially love the title.. And these lines:
This is not my dream.
The bird is dreaming me.
There is no bird or me,
there is only water and thirst.
you carry us along
into birdsong
into what we all know
“asleep, awake
it’s all one”
For me the poem gets at the moment just after waking when I’m not quite awake and may remember my dream but am half-aware that I’m thirsty. The poem gets at the purity of the moment, especially with the lines “small dipper that hangs / over the celestial basin” and hard it is to achieve in our waking life
So much to like here. The title invites me in and the poem does not disappoint!
Love:
The bird is dreaming me.