Our daughter paints.
She paints anime characters.
She learns Japanese to name them.
She knows naming is the first human occupation.
She could speak volumes before she acquired words.
Outside, cradled between the elms, Jupiter rose
above the horizon, and I called my daughter to see
if she could see his tiger orange stripes
and shining moons.
Only two, she tip-toed to the telescope stalking
with expectant pursed lips—and stretching up
couldn’t spy in the eyepiece.
Lifting up on a stool, she declared
she had it, knew
just what to do,
the frosted green grass hugging her shoes,
and entered the house
to make up the planet that night
using two pieces of construction paper
and scissors.
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“She knows naming is the first human occupation.”
So much in that one line.
Very poignant piece. Hit the feels button. Nice write.
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I love everything about this poem. It shows and never tells. Another outstanding poem.
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i hope you keep finding ways to nourish her sense of visual memory.. makes the best kinds of adults.. 🙂
she feeds herself now. she also plays music.
“naming is the first human occupation”
Manny, this is really magnificent. The voice and storytelling here are so strong. Love this piece.
you are eloquent this morning Jason. it is my favorite this summer.
Oh, I love this! I think this is one of your best.
I think so too!
anytime I talk about her goldheart speaks
Very touching, Manny! Loved it!
I think this is my favorite poem of yours so far this month, Manny! The focus! The love! The restraint! Exquisite work, deeply felt, beautifully controlled. Bravo.
Thank you Kevin-san.
Ditto to all the above!!
Agree with all that has been said.
Especially love:
She could speak volumes before she acquired words.
the frosted green grass hugging her shoes,