For a Camel to Go Through the Eye of a Needle
First he must find it
out in the haystack – a straw
which might break his back.
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First he must find it
out in the haystack – a straw
which might break his back.
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I like the rhyme of haystack and back. I feel the weight of the poem. A great haiku.
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I like this so much! The rhythm of it, plus incorporating multiple proverb type sayings/verses.
totally logical
Clever!
Great blending of these idioms into a thoughtful piece
This is so well done – clever and pithy.
Dang, Chelsie! Love love love this.
Camel life is so hard.