Monday Morning, 8 a.m.
Sitting with me on my porch
over breakfast, Louise Glück
talks about impending death,
her sister going to a place
where she could not speak. I listen
and look up to wave at a neighbor
trucking down his driveway, passing
my son’s pasture. There sheep
and goats graze, not thinking
of death, but separated from it
by a few thin strands of electric
fence. While we do our best
to keep our charges safe, we can’t
know how close we ourselves
are to the end—what might churn
in our bodies or be around a bend.
For this hour though, the air, dry
and cool, yields right-of-way to wrens’
exuberance. Safely at a distance,
a vulture, mute, mimics Louise’s sister.
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Love you sitting with Louise Glück, chatting! Her sister, gone, death waiting for bus all. And all thoughts on an early Monday morning. Well done!
Love:
not thinking
of death, but separated from it
by a few thin strands of electric
fence.
Nancy, you just pull us into the moment with you and then stun us with its beauty!
I think Gluck’s work
has been described
as “mimetic” (if that’s
the correct spelling).
Your poem catches
the essence of that.
It’s a hidden gem.
I love all the details of your morning, how they pull us in, beginning with the lovely/surreal feel of Louis Gluck on your porch talking about impending death, and the connection you make with the sheep “separated from it / by a few thin strands of electric / fence.” And then your perfect ending: “Safely at a distance, / a vulture, mute, mimics Louise’s sister.”
So moving and rich.